4.21.2011

30/30: day twenty-one - what the what?

day twenty-one prompt: Choose one of the poems you've already written and posted as part of this challenge and re-order it in some way. You could rearrange the lines or stanzas/strophes or even words in a line. Think of it as a puzzle that you are taking apart and putting back together in a new way!

the original poem 'once more with feeling' can be found here.

what the what?

with feeling, once more
when it all comes crashing
or
when it doesn't crash at all,
I let myself believe
again, 
that my plan,
the cycle I repeat until
there is a moment,
is the best plan,
everytime I do it to myself
I remember when
what I know that is best,
who is really in charge,
and then
that what I want
I should get. 

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